I have been not in trouble with those things..

2018-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Here is Korea.. We are homogenious racial. And religion is at one's own choice.. If there is obstruct that fails someone's wish, it is a college entrance exam, may be.. I have not lived in America never before. What is it like then in comparison with korea? Thanks for reading..

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)//

Happy Monday!

Thank you for this composition.

I hope that you will continue to improve your English communication skills.

Practice English whenever you can.^^ Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)


Here is Korea.. We are homogenious racial.

>>> We are racial homogenous here in Korea.
And religion is at one\'s own choice..

>>> Religion is a choice.
If there is obstruct that fails someone\'s wish, it is a college entrance exam, may be..

>>> If there is something that will break us if we fail, it\'s the college entrance exam.
I have not lived in America never before.

>>> I have never lived in America before.
What is it like then in comparison with korea?

>>> How is America like compared to Korea?

Thanks for reading..

>>> Correct!

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