I have been practicing the violin.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I started violin I was a kid that going to elementary school.
I am not feeling about any goals of certain purpose of making money.
I am now playing in the PC room.
Thesedays I feel a bit confusion at my daily routine.
I often sleep at unregular time.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you so much for doing your homework!
Have a great night ☺
When I started violin I was a kid that going to elementary school.
>> I started playing the violin when I was an Elementary student.
I am not feeling about any goals of certain purpose of making money.
>> I didn\'t really have any goals at that time.
I am now playing in the PC room.
>> CORRECT
Thesedays I feel a bit confusion at my daily routine.
>> These days, I feel a bit confused with my daily routine.
I often sleep at unregular time.
>> I often sleep irregularly.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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