I have been practicing the violin.

2019-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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When I started violin I was a kid that going to elementary school. I am not feeling about any goals of certain purpose of making money. I am now playing in the PC room. Thesedays I feel a bit confusion at my daily routine. I often sleep at unregular time. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework!

Have a great night  ☺


When I started violin I was a kid that going to elementary school.

>> I started playing the violin when I was an Elementary student.


I am not feeling about any goals of certain purpose of making money.

>> I didn\'t really have any goals at that time.


I am now playing in the PC room. 

>> CORRECT


Thesedays I feel a bit confusion at my daily routine.

>> These days, I feel a bit confused with my daily routine.


I often sleep at unregular time.

>> I often sleep irregularly.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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