I have dreaming a lot thesedays.

2019-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I don\'t have a comfortable sleep. People always dream about making a lot of money. I don\'t know even the reason why they are dream about money. I have lived without suffering any troubles owing to my parents. I am now writing this message in my notebook computer. Today I feel some tired because of bad weather. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

You did great!

Have a great evening ☺


I don\'t have a comfortable sleep.

>> I didn\'t get a good sleep.


People always dream about making a lot of money.

>> CORRECT


I don\'t know even the reason why they are dream about money.

>> I don\'t even know the reason why they dream about money.


I have lived without suffering any troubles owing to my parents.

>> I have lived without suffering from any troubles and I owe that to my parents.


I am now writing this message in my notebook computer.

>> CORRECT


Today I feel some tired because of bad weather.

>> Today, I feel tired because of the bad weather.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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