I have less thinking about the living and existing

2020-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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but your question remind me about the living and existing and that is really closed a philosophy. The living that all of animal have is that mean they save the food for living but existing is having a different meaning with the living if we don\'t have any reason of existing and thinking for better in our life we are just same as animal. so I think that there is different thing between living and existing

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Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for your answer!
I totally agree with your answer!
Very good perspective!
Have a good night!

I have less thinking about the living and existing
>>I don\'t have information about living and existing.

but your question remind me about the living and existing and that is really closed a philosophy.
>>But, your question reminded me about living and existing and that is really close to a philosophy.

The living that all of animal have is that mean they save the food for living but existing is having a different meaning with the living
>>The life that all animals have means that they eat food but exisiting has a different meaning from living.

if we don\'t have any reason of existing and thinking for better in our life we are just same as animal.
>>If we don\'t have any reason to exist and think of making our life better, we are just the same as animals.

so I think that there is different thing between living and existing
>>So I think that there is a difference between living and existing.

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