I have many computers in my room.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today\'s weather is fine.
I studied korean history.
I think my computer is too slow.
I want to study korean history. Where should I start?
What was your first impression of me?
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night ☺
Today\'s weather is fine.
>> CORRECT
I studied korean history.
>> I studied Korean history.
I think my computer is too slow.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I think my computer is running slow.
I want to study korean history.
>> I want to study Korean history.
Where should I start?
>> CORRECT
What was your first impression of me?
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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