I have many dreames!
학생이 쓴 원문
I have many dreams. I want to drummer and scientist, baseball gamer and basketball gmmer, soccer gamer.
It\'s because my favorite subjact is music,P.E. and math,science.
Maybe there are more dreames. teacher, Do you have dreams,too?
강사 첨삭
Yey!!!! Parker!! You made your homework! ^_^
Thank you for asking me too! I will tell you about my dreams in class. ^_^
>> I have many dreams. I want to be a Drummer, a Scientist, Baseball, a Basketball, soccer player.
It\'s because my favorite subjact is music,P.E. and math,science.
>> It\'s because my favorite subject is Music, P.E. , Math and Science.
Maybe there are more dreames. teacher, Do you have dreams,too?
>> Maybe there are more dreams that I would like to achieve. Teacher, do you have dreams,too?
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