I have many fault in myself..

2018-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My parents always worry about me.. To think to myself,, I also agree with them.. But I always cheer up in everything happens around me.. and give attention to them.. thanks for reading.. your question is puzzled me somehow...

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,)

Thank you for this composition though I am sure what question you\'re referring to.^^

I will see you then later in class, okay?

I want you to enjoy the rest of the day. Happy Monday!

_T. Mayleen :)


My parents always worry about me..

>>> Correct!
To think to myself,, I also agree with them..

>>> I agree with them so I also think about myself.
But I always cheer up in everything happens around me.. and give attention to them..

>>> That\'s why I always look at the bright side in everything around me and pay attention to them.
thanks for reading..

>>> Correct!

CAPITALIZE THE FIRST LETTER OF THE FIRST WORD. ^^

>>> Thanks for reading.

your question is puzzled me somehow...

>>> Your question puzzled me somehow.

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