I have many SD cards which can reads and writes memory.
학생이 쓴 원문
I often erase the memory.
I have had a lot of memory cards.
But now I lost some of them.
I can download it through internet.
And I purchased several camera thruough internet.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]. You did well in doing your homework. See you in our class.
I often erase the memory.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I often erase its memory.
But now I lost some of them.
>>>But now, I lost some of them.
I can download it through internet.
>>>I can download it through the internet.
And I purchased several camera thruough internet.
>>>And I purchased several cameras through the internet.
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