I have many wishes.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to hear song that wishes a dream.
I wish I were taller.
When I was young I wish I had a tall body.
Wishes for a happy birthday.
My birthday is onn second January.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s nice to know your thoughts about this and you did a very good job expressing yourself through writing. Keep it up!^_^
I like to hear song that wishes a dream.
>>>>I like to hear a song that wishes a dream.
When I was young I wish I had a tall body.
>>> When I was young, I wished I was a tall guy.
My birthday is onn second January.
>>>My birthday is on January 2nd.
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