I have no memory when I joined the competitions.

2019-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

In speech contest which had held a long time ago I won a prize as a elementary student. Nowadays I am trying to join a company to make money. I received a prize from elementary school a long time ago. I am talking to translation company now and studying some scripts from there. I am pleased to feel my English skills are getting better and better daily. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing this to me.

I really appreciate it.

I\'m glad that you\'re seeing improvements in your English skills. ^^

I also hope that you\'ll get in the company you wanted to join in.

Good luck and you can do it! ^^

~Teacher Gina

In speech contest which had held a long time ago I won a prize as a elementary student.

>> In a speech contest which was held a long time ago, I won a prize as an elementary student.

Nowadays I am trying to join a company to make money.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: Nowadays, I am trying to apply in a company to earn money.
I received a prize from elementary school a long time ago.

>> CORRECT.
I am talking to translation company now and studying some scripts from there.

>> I am talking to a translation company now and studying some scripts from them.
I am pleased to feel my English skills are getting better and better daily.

>> I am pleased to feel that my English skills are getting better and better daily.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

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