I have not dreamed any dream that I can not fulfill.
학생이 쓴 원문
As I strolled along the street there are many architectures that allure me.
That is symbol that indicates how our city developed for so long.
And there are many old house along the river.
I sleep during night in my bed which my parents bought for me.
The bed is very comfort to sleep and lie.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night ☺
As I strolled along the street there are many architectures that allure me.
>> I\'ve seen a lot of architectures that allure me as I\'ve strolled along the streets.
>> I\'ve seen a lot of architectures that allure me as I\'ve strolled along the streets.
That is symbol that indicates how our city developed for so long.
>> That is one of the symbols that indicate how much our city has developed.
>> That is one of the symbols that indicate how much our city has developed.
And there are many old house along the river.
>> There are also many old houses along the river.
>> There are also many old houses along the river.
I sleep during night in my bed which my parents bought for me.
>> I always sleep in my bed which my parents bought for me.
>> I always sleep in my bed which my parents bought for me.
The bed is very comfort to sleep and lie.
>> My bed is very comfortable to sleep in.
>> My bed is very comfortable to sleep in.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
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