I have one doughter.

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I have one daughter.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> I have a daughter.
She is only 5 months.

>> She is only 5 months old.
She wos born in July.

>> She was born in July.
At that time So hot in korea.

>> At that time, the weather in Korea was hot.
I was breastfeeding everytime that was so hard to me.

>> I was breastfeeding all the time and that was so hard for me.
Because I needed to Protect my body warm. on the other hand my baby had to keep Cool.

>> This is because I needed to keep my body warm but on the other hand, my baby had to feel cool.
we had different body temperature.

>> We had different body temperatures.
she\'s body so hot and I had Poured my sweat like rain when I brestfeeded.

>> Her body feels hot and my sweat was pouring like rain when I breastfed.
I Still brestfeed. but I\'m happy now because It\'s wirter.

>> I still breastfeed, but I\'m happy now because it\'s winter.
I will brestfeed untill my baby Fist Birthday.

>> I will breastfeed until my baby\'s fist birthday.
But I\'m not sure. I have to back to my work after 3months. That\'s my Concern.

>> But I\'m not sure because I have to go back to my work after 3 months. 

That\'s my Concern.

>> That\'s my concern.

OR

>> That\'s what I\'m worrying about.