I have something which may bother you.

2011-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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It's necessary that China the women's participation rate in political and economic activities increase in order to be one of industrialized countries. - it's on my book, I can't understand the structure of this sentense from 'China' to 'increase'. I think 'China' is the Subject and 'increase' is the Verb. How about 'the women's...rate'? I guess it's the Objective. So I thought of the changed position of the Objective. But judging from what I learn, the order would be ' O+S+V' if it were. But when I interpret it, its order is ' S+O+V'. I also guess 'increase' is an intransitive verb and 'the women's..rate' is the Subject. So how about 'China'? Why isn't it 'Chinese' and if it had been changed, would it have to be next to 'the'? Can you understand what I mean ?

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Hello [이름]!

Don뭪 worry I understand what you mean and I totally agree with all your deliberation.

I have the same understanding and conclusion like you do.

I would agree that the correct sentence should be:

It's necessary that the Chinese women's participation rate in political and economic activities increase in order to be one of industrialized countries.

The pattern is [ (Scompliment+S) + V + (O+Ocompliment)]

(Scompliment+S) = 밒t뭩 necessary that the Chinese women뭩 participation rate뀛

V = 밿ncrease in order to be

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