I have the time only for me.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What do people in your country usually do to unwind or have fun after work or after studying?
- In my country, most people get some rest after getting off work. Some people drink to relief their stress and Some people work out to develop their physical strength. In my case, I have the time only for me. I don\'t usually have private meetings from monday to thursday, except for something really important. For the time, I have a class with you through Power English and I study english through the cake application that provides videos that help me study english. It has a lot of videos. Also I take classes for vocabulary, grammar,.. through online lecture. And then I go out to work out. I just run everyday. After finishing the excercise, The most important is watching the movie... If I don\'t watch a movie, today will be not over. haha. I think most people in korea will be similar to me... I feel good when I finish one day like this... It is very common and usual...
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
I like how you spend your day and it\'s really good to know that you find studying English really fun.
I admire how passionate you are about it. ^^
I also like it when you mentioned about watching a movie at the end which completes your day. hahah ^^
Anyway, see you later and have a good day!
~Teacher Gina
- In my country, most people get some rest after getting off work.
>> CORRECT.
Some people drink to relief their stress and Some people work out to develop their physical strength.
>> Some people drink to relieve their stress and some work out to develop their physical strength.
In my case, I have the time only for me.
>> In my case, I only have the time for myself.
I don\'t usually have private meetings from monday to thursday, except for something really important.
>> I don\'t usually have private meetings from Mondays to Thursdays, except when there is something really important.
For the time, I have a class with you through Power English and I study english through the cake application that provides videos that help me study english.
>> For the meantime, I have a class with you through Power English and I study English through the cake application that provides videos that help me study English.
It has a lot of videos.
>> CORRECT.
Also I take classes for vocabulary, grammar,.. through online lecture.
>> Also, I take classes for vocabulary and grammar through an online lecture.
And then I go out to work out. I just run everyday.
>> CORRECT.
After finishing the excercise, The most important is watching the movie... If I don\'t watch a movie, today will be not over. haha.
>> After finishing the exercise, I watch a movie which is the most important thing because if I don\'t, the day will not be over.
I think most people in Korea will be similar to me...
>> CORRECT.
I feel good when I finish one day like this...
>> I feel good when I finish my day like this.
It is very common and usual...
>> CORRECT.
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