I have three wishes.

2021-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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First,my wish is to be a man of genius. So I want to be a great man. Second,my wish is that want to be dexterity.So I want well make a lego. Third, my wish is to be a historian. It is a nice.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a great weekend! :)

~ T. Tricia

First,my wish is to be a man of genius.
>> First, my wish is to be an intelligent man.

So I want to be a great man.
>> So I could be a great man.

Second,my wish is that want to be dexterity.
>> Second, my wish is to be skillful.

So I want well make a lego.
>> So I could build Legos well.

Third, my wish is to be a historian.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Lastly. I wish to be a historian.

It is a nice.
>> It\'s nice.

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