I have to go to the supermarket
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I go to the supermarket twice or three times a week. But I think it will be fewer because nowadays we bought many things to fill our new house. We have purchased almost everything we need, so maybe it will be fine just once or twice a week.
when I go to the supermarket, I usually buy groceries. I pick up some foods just as much as we will eat for a week, such as vegetables, beverage, fruits and cookies. I also get some cooking ware or household goods but they are not main items. I buy them at times when I just felt them needed.
I always go to the supermarket with my husband. Before I got married, I went to the supermarket with my parents all the time. However, I moved out from them and where I'm living is far from my parents' house so now I go to the supermarket with my husband. We often go there with my mother in law. Then, she makes a payment our things. Thus, we are fond of going to supermarket with her.
강사 첨삭
Hi Rayuseem! Thanks for making your assignment. I provided some suggestions for your sentence construction. See you!
-Teacher Faye
I go to the supermarket twice or three times a week.
>> I go to the supermarket twice or thrice a week.
But I think it will be fewer because nowadays we bought many things to fill our new house.
>> But I think I\'ll seldom go to the market nowadays since we bought many things for our new house.
We have purchased almost everything we need, so maybe it will be fine just once or twice a week.
>>We have purchased almost everything we need, so maybe it will be just fine to go there once or twice a week. When I go to the supermarket, I usually buy groceries.
>>When I go to the supermarket, I usually buy grocery items.
I pick up some foods just as much as we will eat for a week, such as vegetables, beverage, fruits and cookies.
>> I only choose foods that we will consume for a week. Among those are are vegeables, fruits and cookies.
I also get some cooking ware or household goods but they are not main items.
>> I also get cooking wares or household items but they are not the main priority in my list.
I buy them at times when I just felt them needed.
>> I only buy items if its a necessity. I always go to the supermarket with my husband.
>> Correct!
Before I got married, I went to the supermarket with my parents all the time.
>> Before I got married, I used to go to the market with my parents always.
However, I moved out from them and where I\'m living is far from my parents\' house so now I go to the supermarket with my husband.
>> However, since I moved out and is now living away from them, I go to the supermarket with my husband.
We often go there with my mother in law.
>>Correct!
Then, she makes a payment our things.
>> Then, she pays for our things.
Thus, we are fond of going to supermarket with her.
>>Thus, we really enjoy going to the supermarket with her.
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