I have to sleep early.

2012-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

In the morning, I was terrible. When I had one wink, a clock on the wall changed their hands. After lunch, I was exhausted. So I decided to sleep more early for blight tomorrow. But I am still sleepy. It's just as well that I'm alone in my laboratory. Because nobody knows that I took a nap :) I believe that tomorrow will come into a billiant today to me. You know, it's heat wave warning today. This hot atmoshphere is unbelievable. What a great day only for sunflowers. I'm not a sunflower. I want to avoid strong sunshine. Luckily, I am just in the lab. But be careful of dangerous heat! 1.Yes, but it (is still been built) at the moment. 2.although B-'s Fifth Symphony (had played) rather pooly 3.In some parts of the world, tea (is served) with milk and sugar. 4.I need one more stamp before my collection (is complited) 5.Several people (was badly hurt) in yesterday's car crash

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

            Good afternoon! Thank you for writing in the website despite your busy schedule. I hope you\'d be more careful with the sunshine. You might get skin disease. Anyway, smile. See you in class.

Teacher Nica

In the morning, I was terrible. 

>> In the morning, I felt terrible.

When I had one wink, a clock on the wall changed their hands. 

>>I just blinked then the clock on the wall changed their hands.

After lunch, I was exhausted.

>>Correct

So I decided to sleep more early for blight tomorrow.

>> So I decided to sleep earlier for a bright tomorrow.

But I am still sleepy.

>>Correct

It\'s just as well that I\'m alone in my laboratory.

>>It\'s good that I\'m just alone in my laboratory.

Because nobody knows that I took a nap :)

>>Correct

I believe that tomorrow will come into a brilliant today to me.

>>I think tomorrow will be a brilliant day for me.

You know, it\'s heat wave warning today.

>> You know, there\'s heat wave warning today.

This hot atmosphere is unbelievable.

>>Correct

What a great day only for sunflowers!

>>Correct

I\'m not a sunflower.

>>Correct

I want to avoid the strong sunshine. 

>>Correct

Luckily, I am just in the lab.

>>Correct

But be careful of dangerous heat!

>>Correct

1.Yes, but it (is still been built) at the moment.

>>1. c.is still being built

2.although B-\'s Fifth Symphony (had played) rather pooly

>>d.was played 

3.In some parts of the world, tea (is served) with milk and sugar.

>>3. c.served

4.I need one more stamp before my collection (is complited)

>>4. c.is completed 

5.Several people (was badly hurt) in yesterday\'s car crash.

>>5. a.were badly hurt

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