I have visited many places that I had never visited.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have been Europe once.
And I had visited many places but I have no memories to remember.
Because it is been a long while ago.
In Kwang ju city there is a mountain being called mudeung.
It is located the east part of city as I assumming. I often climb it with my father.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks again for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night. ☺
I have been Europe once.
>> I have been to Europe once.
>> I have been to Europe once.
And I had visited many places but I have no memories to remember.
Because it is been a long while ago.
>> I have also visited many places but I can\'t remember anything because it has been a long time.
Because it is been a long while ago.
>> I have also visited many places but I can\'t remember anything because it has been a long time.
In Kwang ju city there is a mountain being called mudeung.
>> In Kwang Ju city, there is a mountain called Mudeung.
>> In Kwang Ju city, there is a mountain called Mudeung.
It is located the east part of city as I assumming.
>> It is located in the eastern part of the city, I think.
I often climb it with my father.
>> I often go there with my father.
>> I often go there with my father.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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