I haven\'t received any re-gift ever.

2019-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I bought a second-hand model hellicopter. I haven\'t re-gifted anything for no charge. My computer is new model so it works well compared to old model of my computer. If I had a free time, I go to garaoke. In my room, there is a lots of language teaching books. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

I bought a second-hand model hellicopter.

>> I bought a second-hand model helicopter.

I haven\'t re-gifted anything for no charge.

>> I haven\'t re-gifted anything.

My computer is new model so it works well compared to old model of my computer.

>> My computer is a new model so it works well compared to my old model computer.

If I had a free time, I go to garaoke.

>> I go to the Karaoke during my free time.

In my room, there is a lots of language teaching books.

>> There are lots of language teaching books in my room.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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