I havn\'t got any money on the road and I will get the money to owner if I find money on the road.
학생이 쓴 원문
Every moment is precious. or Time is money.
I consider time more important than money.
Money enables one to do a lot of things.
Love of money is common to all.
Greed is the thing we have to avoid.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Money enables one to do a lot of things.
>> CORRECT
Thanks for doing your homework ^^
It\'s almost perfect! Amazing job!
I hope you are having a great night.
Take care ☺
Every moment is precious. or Time is money.
>> Every moment is precious or as they say; time is money.
>> Every moment is precious or as they say; time is money.
I consider time more important than money.
>> CORRECT
Money enables one to do a lot of things.
>> CORRECT
Love of money is common to all.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Greed is the thing we have to avoid.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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