I heard about the news that Yuna have felt pain in her back.

Hello there!^.^

Happy Monday!^.^

Thank you so much for making this wonderful composition.

With this, I understood how Koreans feel nowadays concerning the condition of Yuna.

I admire her as well!^.^

Anyhow, please check the corrections I made and the alternative sentence patterns I put for you.

Use them in explaining more of your ideas next time!

See you in class!^.^

~~T. Nina~~

I heard about the news that Yuna have felt pain in her back.

>> Correct.
I didn\'t know she is suffering from back pain.

>> Correct.

>> OR: I didn\'t have any idea that she has been suffering from back pain.
But she proved she is strong.

>> Correct.
all athlete have their enough body condition to play or perform.

>> All athletes have their body condition prepared to play or perform.
but Yuna\'s body condition is already exceeded more than she can stand it.

>> But Yuna\'s body condition has already exceeded the limit that it can stand.

Yuna\'s spine was twistered and her anker shape was changed because of skating

>> Yuna\'s spine was twisted and the shape of her ankle was changed because of skating.
I admire Yuna because Yuna actually wanted to quite the skating before but she participated this Olympics to give a chance to her juniors.

>> I admire Yuna because she actually wanted to quit from skating before but still participated in the Olympics game to give a chance to her juniors.
(In skating, a country of the winner has a one more ticket to participate olympics, so yuna get 1 more ticket.)

>> A country that won in the previous skating contest has one more ticket to participate during the Olympics game so Yuna got one more ticket.
Now she will start second life as a leader of skating.

>> Now, she will start her second life as a leader in skating.
She will be remembered by all Korean in history as well as her ability.

>> Correct.

>> OR: She and her ability will be remembered by Korean people in our history.