I heard it's raining in your country today? kkk what do you enjoy doing while it's raining? :D

2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I heard it's raining in your country today? kkk what do you enjoy doing while it's raining? :D I like rainy days when I stay at home.kkk I usually watching TV, make the Korean pancakes, drink rice wine. Do you know rice wine? That name is Makgeori. My cousin likes Makgeori. She lives in USA. When she visited my hous she first said to me 'I want to drink Makgeori and go to Noraebang!' That was so funny. If you have opportunity, you can try to drink that with Korean pancakes.

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I like rainy days when I stay at home.kkk

>> CORRECT


 I usually watching TV, make the Korean pancakes, drink rice wine.

>> I usually watch TV, make Korean pancakes and drink rice wine.


 Do you know rice wine? That name is Makgeori.

>> CORRECT

(kkk it is also my favorite ^^)


 My cousin likes Makgeori. She lives in USA.

>> OCCRECT


When she visited my hous she first said to me \'I want to drink Makgeori and go to Noraebang!\'

>> When she visited my house, she first told me \"I want to drink Makeoli and I want to go to Norar bbang!.\"


 That was so funny. If you have opportunity, you can try to drink that with Korean pancakes.

>> It was so fun! If you have an opportunity. You can try drinking that with Korean pancakes.


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