I heard that saying from pop song.

2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I can make a world more brighter by reducing my garbage. The world always have seen good to me. If We live together helping each other and the world will be a good place to live. playing the violin makes me feel better and let me think that I am living in a good world. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee.

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

Nice answer! Keep it up ☺

Talk to you tomorrow.

I can make a world more brighter by reducing my garbage.

>> I can make the world much brighter by reducing garbage.

The world always have seen good to me.

>> The world have been always good to me.

If We live together helping each other and the world will be a good place to live.

>> If we live together by helping each other and the world will be a good place to live.

playing the violin makes me feel better and let me think that I am living in a good world.

>> Playing the violin makes me feel better and it makes me think that I am living in a good world.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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