i hope

2009-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

talk more systematically. For example, I want to talk about one topic. If you give me a topic beforehand, I will prepare about it. I think, just talking about 'my today' is proper for twice. And speak more slowly plz. Lastly, if you have any information about Hawaii, tell me about it. See u soon. ^^

강사 첨삭

HI hayley.   I sent a text message for you last night. You can download our book from the website. Your book's title is Structure 1.   Let me research about Hawaii so I can share something to you.   Take care.!!   here's your corrected composition:   Talk more systematically, like if we are going to talk about one topic inform me beforehand so I could prepare for it. Please speak slowly. If you have any information about Hawaii please tell me about it. See you soon.  

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