I hope sleep all day.

2023-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

My perfect weekend is sleeping all day. Sleep is an important thing in our life. Sleeping makes reduces stress. I can\'t sleep well because I always dream. So I hope I don\'t dream and sleep all day.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름],

Great job on completing your homework! I can see that you\'ve expressed your preference for a perfect weekend. Sleep is indeed important in our lives as it helps us relax and reduce stress. However, it seems like you mentioned that dreaming affects your sleep quality. I understand how that can be challenging. Remember to create a peaceful sleep environment and practice relaxation techniques to improve your sleep. Keep up the good work Da [이름]. See you tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

Title: I hope sleep all day.

>>I hope to sleep all day.


My perfect weekend is sleeping all day.

>>CORRECT

Sleep is an important thing in our life.

>>CORRECT

Sleeping makes reduces stress.

>>Sleeping reduces stress.
I can\'t sleep well because I always dream.

>>CORRECT

So I hope I don\'t dream and sleep all day.

>>So, I hope I don\'t dream and can sleep all day.

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