I hope teacher Shy will be better soon.
학생이 쓴 원문
I heard she got sick. She shouldn't be serious sick.
I'm worry about her.
I hope Shy will be get well soo and let me hear her dilight voice.
Take care.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for your concern!
Here are some corrections for your sentences, kindly review them.
Have a good day! Take care!
I heard she got sick.
>> Correct
She shouldn't be serious sick.
>> She couldn’t be seriously sick.
I'm worry about her.
>> I’m worried about her.
I hope Shy will be get well soo and let me hear her dilight voice.
>> I hope Shy will get well soon so that I can hear her delightful voice again.
Take care.
>> Correct
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