I hope that new class...
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I hope You will be my teacher continously at this month.
I'm so idle last class.
I'll prepare this class more faithfully.
So, I hope that my english grade will be up by one stap.
Regards,
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!!! I am so happy that you found time to write a composition here..
Of course, I will always be your teacher.. I like you to be my student for many months more... ^_^
Actually, you can always send me yor composition anytime and I will check it for you..
You did great on our last class Sir so don't worry about it... ^_^
Anyway, I have a few corrections here:
I hope that new class...
>> My hopes on our new class
I hope You will be my teacher continously at this month.
>> I hope you will be my teacher continously for this month.
I'm so idle last class.
>> I was not responsive on our last class.
I'll prepare this class more faithfully.>> I'll prepare for this class more faithfully.
So, I hope that my english grade will be up by one stap.
>> So, I hope that my english grade will be up by one step.
See you later Mr. [이름]!!
T. Shy
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