I hope that new class...

2009-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I hope You will be my teacher continously at this month. I'm so idle last class. I'll prepare this class more faithfully. So, I hope that my english grade will be up by one stap. Regards, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]!!! I am so happy that you found time to write a composition here.. Of course, I will always be your teacher.. I like you to be my student for many months more... ^_^   Actually, you can always send me yor composition anytime and I will check it for you.. You did great on our last class Sir so don't worry about it... ^_^                                                                                                                                                                                      Anyway, I have a few corrections here:     I hope that new class... >> My hopes on our new class   I hope You will be my teacher continously at this month. >> I hope you will be my teacher continously for this month.   I'm so idle last class. >> I was not responsive on our last class.   I'll prepare this class more faithfully.>> I'll prepare for this class more faithfully.   So, I hope that my english grade will be up by one stap. >> So, I hope that my english grade will be up by one step.                                                                                                                                                                                    See you later Mr. [이름]!! T. Shy  

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