I hope that psychology will be used for many good things around us.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have seen the hero who used the psychology caught the criminal in the movie.
To read other person's mind is not easy, that is a very mysterious and wonderful thing.
I think that is wonderful thing to listen to other's story and to understand other's situation.
I hope that psychology will be used for many good things around us.
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How are you doing today?
I hope that you are doing well.
Good job in doing your homework.
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I have seen the hero who used the psychology caught the criminal in the movie.
>> I have seen a hero who used psychology to catch a criminal in a movie.
To read other person\'s mind is not easy, that is a very mysterious and wonderful thing.
>> To read a person\'s mind is not easy and I consider this a very mysterious and wonderful thing.
I think that is wonderful thing to listen to other\'s story and to understand other\'s situation.
>> I think that it is a wonderful thing to listen to other\'s story and to understand other\'s situation.
I hope that psychology will be used for many good things around us.
>> Correct!
>> I have seen a hero who used psychology to catch a criminal in a movie.
To read other person\'s mind is not easy, that is a very mysterious and wonderful thing.
>> To read a person\'s mind is not easy and I consider this a very mysterious and wonderful thing.
I think that is wonderful thing to listen to other\'s story and to understand other\'s situation.
>> I think that it is a wonderful thing to listen to other\'s story and to understand other\'s situation.
I hope that psychology will be used for many good things around us.
>> Correct!
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