I hope to speak about the Sub-prime Mortgage

2010-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hello, Connie I hoped to speak about the Sub-prime Mortgage. You can read the article below. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subprime_lending This is the Reason about US Crisis in 2008. So, they can changed their president and they can held goverment by a Democratic Party. Nowaday, Many people in the world suffered for Nation's Debt. They had to repay the Debt of their parent's generation. We must left ours children the Beautiful World. However, We are lefting ours childeren the Nation's Debt. This is our world's financial problem.

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Hi Min, Happy Monday, I hope you had a nice weekend. Oh your topic is very nice, I would be glad to listen to your opinion regarding the  world’s economy crisis. This will be very interesting. I’ll see you tonight. Stay safe, Connie Hello, Connie                         I hoped to speak about the Sub-prime Mortgage. >> I want to talk about the Sub-prime Mortgage.You can read the article below.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subprime_lendingThis is the Reason about US Crisis in 2008. >> This is the reason about the US Crisis in 2008. So, they can changed their president and they can held goverment by a Democratic Party. >> So, they changed their president under a Democratic government.Nowaday, Many people in the world suffered for Nation's Debt. >> Nowadays, many people in the world suffering from the Nation’s Debt.They had to repay the Debt of their parent's generation. >> CorrectWe must left ours children the Beautiful World. >> WE must leave a beautiful world to our children.However, We are lefting ours childeren the Nation's Debt. >> However, we are leaving our children the nation’s debt.This is our world's financial problem.

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