I hoped to say that..
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, shy
yesterday in our class,
I hoped to say that below.
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I think that I will forget something.
I will have a strong memory about forgetting.
because, I am a Stone Brain.
but, We write a paper, it's no longer as write a stone.
Stone Brain is difficulty to learn.
but If we can write this Stone Brain's
then they Memories are Forever such as Rosetta Stone.
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have a good day,
see you~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I suppose what you mean by Stone Brain is that you are forgetful or the IQ level is a bit low.
Rosetta stone is a famous artifact from Egypt that helped decipher Egyptian hieroglyphic writings.
Anyway, I hope the I was able to translate the idea that you wanted to express with your composition above.
Here are my corrections:
I will have a strong memory about forgetting.
>> This sentence is ironic. The first part (strong memory) is contradicting with the second part (forgetting). So I suppose you mean, you are forgetful. You easily forget things and you have bad memory.
but, We write a paper, it's no longer as write a stone.>> but if we write in a paper, it's not the same as writing in stone.
Stone Brain is difficulty to learn.>> Stone Brain is difficult to learn.
>> Stone Brain is a difficult situation.
but If we can write this Stone Brain's >> but If we can overcome this Stone Brain
then they Memories are Forever such as Rosetta Stone.>> then the memories are forever like the Rosetta Stone.
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