I hoped to say that..

2010-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hi, shy yesterday in our class, I hoped to say that below. --------------------------------------------------------- I think that I will forget something. I will have a strong memory about forgetting. because, I am a Stone Brain. but, We write a paper, it's no longer as write a stone. Stone Brain is difficulty to learn. but If we can write this Stone Brain's then they Memories are Forever such as Rosetta Stone. --------------------------------------------------------- have a good day, see you~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   I suppose what you mean by Stone Brain is that you are forgetful or the IQ level is a bit low. Rosetta stone is a famous artifact from Egypt that helped decipher Egyptian hieroglyphic writings. Anyway, I hope the I was able to translate the idea that you wanted to express with your composition above. Here are my corrections:   I will have a strong memory about forgetting. >> This sentence is ironic. The first part (strong memory) is contradicting with the second part (forgetting). So I suppose you mean, you are forgetful. You easily forget things and you have bad memory. but, We write a paper, it's no longer as write a stone.>> but if we write in a paper, it's not the same as writing in stone. Stone Brain is difficulty to learn.>> Stone Brain is difficult to learn. >> Stone Brain is a difficult situation. but If we can write this Stone Brain's >> but If we can overcome this Stone Brain then they Memories are Forever such as Rosetta Stone.>> then the memories are forever like the Rosetta Stone.

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