I i had,

2014-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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If I had that kinds of ability, first of all, I would have memorized lottory numbers which could make me rich. I wouln't have to study because, When I failed in a test I jsut took the test again. I think it is the best ability in the world. I could get a job as a expecter or foreteller like a Nostradamus. And I could avoid bad things which could be ouccured to me. Maybe, I could invent everything because I could see the future. In this case, Probably, Many people would followed me, because it is somekind of sacred ability in religious belief. I could protect our nature earth from trash and dirty things.

강사 첨삭

Good evening again!

That kind of ability is really wonderful but of course, there are pros and cons of it.

We should always be thankful for what we have.

Thanks for your marvelous ideas again.

Please be careful with the words you use, the spelling of the words and verb tenses too.

Find time to go over the corrections when during your spare time.

Take care.
Teacher Nina


If I had that kinds of ability,

>> If I had those kinds of ability:
first of all, I would have memorized lottory numbers which could make me rich.

>> First of all, I would have memorized the lottery numbers which would make me rich.
I wouln\'t have to study because, When I failed in a test I jsut took the test again.

>> I wouldn\'t have to study because when I fail in a test I just have to take it again.
I think it is the best ability in the world.

>> I think it is the best ability in the world.
I could get a job as a expecter or foreteller like a Nostradamus.

>> I could get a job as a foreteller like a Nostradamus.
And I could avoid bad things which could be ouccured to me.

>> And I could avoid bad things/ situations that will occur.
Maybe, I could invent everything because I could see the future.

>> correct
In this case, Probably, Many people would followed me, because it is somekind of sacred ability in religious belief.

>> In this case, probably many people would follow me, because it is somewhat a sacred ability in religious beliefs. 
I could protect our nature earth from trash and dirty things.

>> I could protect our nature from trash.

>> OR: I could protect the Earth from trash or other things.

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