I just read an article which is pressed on the internet.
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy the internet surfing often.
The content of internet is interesting and it\'s fun to use computer for doing many things.
And I can see some moving pictures on the internet and do a lot of things.
The Internet is changing the way people shop.
I can just look up some information on the Internet.
Computer is useful in many ways.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks for doing your homework!
I hope you are having a great night ☺
I enjoy the internet surfing often.
>> I often enjoy surfing the internet.
>> I often enjoy surfing the internet.
The content of internet is interesting and it\'s fun to use computer for doing many things.
>> It\'s interesting, fun and I can do lots of things online.
>> It\'s interesting, fun and I can do lots of things online.
And I can see some moving pictures on the internet and do a lot of things.
>> I can also see some GIFs on the internet.
>> I can also see some GIFs on the internet.
The Internet is changing the way people shop.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I can just look up some information on the Internet.
>> CORRECT
Computer is useful in many ways.
>> The computer is useful in many ways.
>> The computer is useful in many ways.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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