I just want to write something
학생이 쓴 원문
It is the first time, I use this chace to improve my writing skill.
I didn't know before this time. There is a feedback and writing class.
It is so nice for me because I also have some problems about writing.
But the best problem is also speaking.
Like today, I want to say something about the founding of my country myth.
But it is hard to think 'fit word'.
Then, can I write anything in this board?
And sometimes can you help my writing for my class presentation or exam?
Next time, I'll do the homework.
See U !
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!
Indeed! it is very important for you to do your homework because these are simple excercises for you to improve more on your English writing, reading, thinking, and analizing skills. Thank you very much for making an effort to write a composition today, I commend you for this.
And yes, I am your teacher and I am very much willing to help you.
Great job!!
See you later!!
T.Jennifer
It is the first time, I use this chace to improve my writing skill.>>This is my first time to write a composition. I will use/take this chance to improve my writing skills.I didn\'t know before this time. There is a feedback and writing class.>>I didn\'t know until this time that feedback is being given for writing classes.It is so nice for me because I also have some problems about writing.>>It is very nice for me because I also have some problems in writing.
>>It is very useful/beneficial for me because I also have some problems in writing.But the best problem is also speaking.>>But my worst problem is speaking.Like today, I want to say something about the founding of my country myth.>>Like today, I wanted to say something about the founding of my country.
>>Like today, I wanted to say something about the myth of how my country was founded.But it is hard to think \'fit word\'. >>But it was hard to think of words that fit.
>>But it was difficult to think or say the right words.Then, can I write anything in this board?>>So, can I write about anything here?And sometimes can you help my writing for my class presentation or exam?>>And sometimes can you also help me write for my class presentation or exam?Next time, I\'ll do the homework.
>>CORRECT
>>Next time, I\'ll do my homework.See U !
>>I\'ll see you later!
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