I know it is very bad thing to speak ill of my friend. but..

2014-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I want to tell you an episode on my trip to Thailand. As you know, I went to Thailand with my three friends on this holiday. We are old friends. We know each other well. But During the trip, sometimes, we had some trouble. One of us always asked something, even very easy and not that important such as how much is it in Korean money rate? (she alreay knew the money rate.) or after buying something, is my desicion right? good? and so on over and over again... In addtion, she didn't speak English at all and she wanted something like good or extra service a lot. Of course, My speaking is very poor, but I am the best of all. It was not that good. Whenever, we bought something or needed to ask something to information certer or hotel reception, It was I that had to tell it to them. But My friends always wanted and complained something more. And It was on me. It made me very upset. Even she didn't bring her own a straw hat, sunglasses and even a cell phone charger. she always borrowed them from us... I'm sorry to tell like this. But it was awful!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition. Thanks for sharing this as well. I understand how you felt then. I think it really feels different when you live in one house with someone you thought you knew for a long time. I heard the same experiences from other people before. However, I hope this will pass and you will feel comfortable with her again. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ I want to tell you an episode on my trip to Thailand.>> Correct As you know, I went to Thailand with my three friends on this holiday.>> Correct We are old friends. >> Correct We know each other well. >> Correct But During the trip, sometimes, we had some trouble. >> But during the trip, we had some troubles. One of us always asked something, even very easy and not that important such as how much is it in Korean money rate? (she alreay knew the money rate.) or after buying something, is my desicion right? good? and so on over and over again... >> One of us always asked many things - even very easy and not that important stuffs such as \"How much is it in Korean Won?\" (she knows the currency exchange!); or after buying something, she asked, \"Is my decision right? good?\" and so on over and over again. In addtion, she didn\'t speak English at all and she wanted something like good or extra service a lot. >> In addition, she can\'t speak English at all and most of the time she wanted something like good or extra service. Of course, My speaking is very poor, but I am the best of all. >> Of course my speaking skill is poor, but I\'m the best among the three of us. It was not that good. >> Correct Whenever, we bought something or needed to ask something to information certer or hotel reception, It was I that had to tell it to them. >> Whenever we bought something or needed to ask something to the information center or hotel reception, it was I who had to tell them. But My friends always wanted and complained something more. >> But my friends always wanted and complained about something more. And it was on me. >> Correct It made me very upset. >> Correct Even she didn\'t bring her own a straw hat, sunglasses and even a cell phone charger. >> She didn\'t even bring her own straw hat, sunglasses, and cell phone charger. She always borrowed them from us...>> Correct I\'m sorry to tell like this. >> I\'m so sorry to tell you these. But it was awful! >> Correct

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