I know what you think of

2011-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

He texted me again and asked what I did. I replied I studied and you should trust this. And then when I got the next message from him, I was so scared. "I do.. so that we can be boy friend and girl friend. Honestly, I'd like you to be my girl friend." It didn't really make sense to me. Because we haven't met for two years and I didn't know him well. I thought of when I heard about kind of weird his personality from co-workers. His ex-girl friend who is Korean and goes out with him for a long time, went skiing together last winter. I'm with a light heart but he is not. I can't endure that situation. And my friend said that his intention might be to sleep with me. I think I can be a friend with foreign people, but can't be honey. I know I'm not a kind of open person. Did I overdo?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Let’s talk about this in our class. -Tiny^0^ He texted me again and asked what I did. >>correctI replied I studied and you should trust this. >>correct >> I replied, “I studied and you should trust this.” >> I replied, “I studied", and you should trust this. And then when I got the next message from him, I was so scared. >>correct"I do.. so that we can be boy friend and girl friend. Honestly, I'd like you to be my girl friend." It didn't really make sense to me. >>correct (Haha! Oh my, that is creepy!)Because we haven't met for two years and I didn't know him well. >>correctI thought of when I heard about kind of weird his personality from co-workers. >> I thought of when I heard about his kind of weird personality from my co-workers. His ex-girl friend, who is a Korean and goes out with him for a long time, went skiing together last winter. >> I and his ex-girlfriend, who is a Korean and goes out with him for a long time, went skiing together last winter. I'm with a light heart but he is not. >>correct I can't endure that situation. >>correctAnd my friend said that his intention might be to sleep with me. >>Correct and I agree!!I think I can be a friend with foreign people, but can't be honey. >>correct >> I think I can be a friend with foreign people, but can't be intimately. I know I'm not a kind of open person. Did I overdo? >>correct

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