i learned about appliances Today
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned about appliances in our class today Examples television,computer and refrigerater i also know about new word rice coocker and vacuum cleaner and Today's activity was very fun and good Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Benjamin,
Thank you for writing things that you have learned in the class.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
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i learned about appliances in our class today Examples television,computer and refrigerater
>> I learned about appliances in our class today. Television, computer and refrigerator are some examples of appliances seen at home.
i also know about new word rice coocker and vacuum cleaner and Today\'s activity was very fun and good Thank you teacher good bye!
>> I have also learned two new words today such as rice cooker and vacuum cleaner. Today\'s activity was fun and I enjoyed it. Thank you so much teacher. Good bye!
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