i learned about book store Today

2017-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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i learned about booksore Today i don't like going to the book store beacause i going to library every day i go to the book store and i want to buy a comic book or story book Today's activity was very fun and great Thank you teacher see you at Friday!

강사 첨삭

HELLO BENJAMIN,

Thank you for sharing your opinion about bookstores.

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

i learned about booksore Today

>> I learned about bookstore today.
i don\'t like going to the book store beacause i going to library every day

>> i don\'t like to go to the bookstore because I prefer going to the library every day.
i go to the book store and i want to buy a comic book or story book

>> I just go to the bookstore to buy a comic book or a story book.
Today\'s activity was very fun and great Thank you teacher see you at Friday!

>> Today\'s activity is fun and great. Thank you teacher. See you on Friday.

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