i learned about chinese new year
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned about chinese new year
chinese new year is on january first lunar
Today's activity was very fun, Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
HELLO BENJAMIN,
Lunar New year is around the corner.
Do you have any plans in Seollal?
Let\'s discuss more of these things in our class.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
i learned about chinese new year
>> I learned about Chinese New year today.
chinese new year is on january first lunar
chinese new year is on january first lunar
>> Chinese new year is on the first day of January in Lunar calendar.
Today\'s activity was very fun,
Today\'s activity was very fun,
>> Today\'s activity is fun.
Thank you teacher good bye!
>> Thank you teacher. Good bye!
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