i learned about dance
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ben! Are you still busy? If not, try to watch some videos of the different dances we learned today. It\'s really amazing.^^ Thanks for this! Bye! Bye!
T. Summer^^
i learned about dance
>> I learned about dances today.
and dance have many kind [hip hope,tango,balle]
>> There are many different kinds of dances like hip hop, tango and ballet
and i don\'t like play dance but my yong brother he don\'t like playing dance and yonger brother like to play dance.
>> My younger brother and I don\'t like to dance but my youngest brother likes to dance.
and Today\'s activity was very fun,
>> Today\'s activity was very fun.
>> I had fun today.
Thank you so much teacher!
>> Correct
>> Thanks a lot ,teacher!
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