i learned about free time

2016-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

학생이 쓴 원문

i learned about free time free time is very fun it is beacause is it free and i play board game on free time and my brother to play board game with me and my brother to like free time Thank a lot teacher Bye Bye!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Benjamin! How are you now? Thank you for this again and for telling me about the book you are reading. I appreciate it a lot. Here are my corrections to your sentences. See you on Friday!  Smile always! Bye! Bye! T. Summer^^ i learned about free time free time >> I learned about free time today. is very fun it is beacause is it free and >> Having a free time is fun because it is free.  i play board game on free time >> I play a board game on my free time. and my brother to play board game with me and my brother to like free time >> My brother plays the board game with me and he also likes having a free time.  Thank a lot teacher >> Thanks a lot teacher. Bye Bye!!! >> Bye! Bye!  

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