i learned about help today
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned about help today and help is very good deed and i want help my friends and Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Benjamin! How do you feel now? Thanks for this. Check out my corrections later after class. Bye! Bye!
T. Summer^^
i learned about help today
>> I learned about helping others today.
and help is very good deed
>> Helping others is a very good deed.
and i want help my friends and
>> I want to help my friends.
Thank you teacher good bye!
>> Thank you teacher and good bye.
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