i learned about home appliances
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned about home appliances Today
home appliances is gas stove television heater juicer and air conditional
and Today's activity was very fun Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
HELLO BENJAMIN,
I\'m happy to know that you were focused in our class today.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
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i learned about home appliances Today
>> I learned about home appliances in our class today.
home appliances is gas stove television heater juicer and air conditional
home appliances is gas stove television heater juicer and air conditional
>> Home appliances are apparatus or device use in the house namely: gas stove, television, heater, juicer and air conditioner.
and Today\'s activity was very fun Thank you teacher good bye!
and Today\'s activity was very fun Thank you teacher good bye!
>> Today\'s activity is fun. Thank you teacher. Good bye!
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