i learned about jobToday

2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

i learned about job Today i want to be vet beacause i don't want animals die beacause ill and my favorite animal is dog beacause cute and smart and i learned new word Today vet and i learned new sentence to it is safer than using an masks and Today's activity was very fun, Thank you teacher good bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello BENJAMIN,

Thank you for writing the summary of our topic for today.

I hope that you will be successful vet someday. ^^

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

i learned about job Today i want to be vet

>> I learned about jobs today and I decided to be a veterinarian.

beacause i don\'t want animals die beacause ill and

>> I don\'t want animals to die.

my favorite animal is dog beacause cute and smart and

>> Dog is my favorite animal because they are cute and smart.

i learned new word Today vet and

>> I learned a new word today which is the word \"vet\".

i learned new sentence to it is safer than using an masks and

>> I also learned a new sentence pattern today in comparing two subjects.

Today\'s activity was very fun,

>> Today\'s activity is fun.

Thank you teacher good bye!

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