i learned about musical instrument

2018-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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i learned about musical instrument musical instrument is piano,guital and drum i can play piano and recorder i happy beacause i know i been~ing Thank you teacher good bye! Today activity was very fun 2

강사 첨삭

HELLO BENJAMIN,
You were good in our class today.
Keep it up!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
i learned about musical instrument 
>> I learned about musical instrument in our class today.
musical instrument is piano,guital and drum
>> Musical instruments such as the piano, guitar and drums.
i can play piano and recorder
>> I can play the piano and the recorder.
i happy beacause i know i been~ing 
>> I am happy because I know how to make use of the pattern: \"have been + -ing\"
Thank you teacher good bye! 
>> Thank you teacher. Good bye!
Today activity was very fun
>> Today\'s activity is fun.

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