i learned about my job

2017-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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i learned about my job and i want to be a vet and writer too and Thank you teaher good bye! Today's activity was very fun.

HELLO BENJAMIN,

Thank you so much for participating in the class today.

I hope that you will reach your goal to be a vet.

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

i learned about my job and i want to be a vet and writer too and

>> I learned about jobs today and I decided to be a vet and a writer.

Thank you teaher good bye! Today\'s activity was very fun.

>> Thank you teacher. Good bye! Today\'s activity is fun.

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