i learned about pocket money

2017-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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i learned about pocket money i save my pocket money in piggy bank,bankbook i buy a snack too Thank you teacher Today's activity was good

강사 첨삭

Hello BENJAMIN,
I am happy that you have learned something for today.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
i learned about pocket money
>> I learned about pocket money today.
i save my pocket money in piggy bank,bankbook 
>> I save my money in my piggy bank and in my bank account.
i buy a snack too
>> i also buy my snack from my pocket money.
Thank you teacher Today\'s activity was good
>> Thank you teacher. Today\'s activity is good.

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