i learned about pocket money today
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned about pockt money Today
pocket money mean is receive a money for parents or grown up peple
i use a pocket money for eat a snack or play with my friend
and Today's activity was very fun, Thank you teacher good bye!
강사 첨삭
HELLO BENJAMIN,
I am happy that you have learned something today.
Have a good day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
i learned about pockt money Today
>> I learned about pocket money today.
pocket money mean is receive a money for parents or grown up peple
pocket money mean is receive a money for parents or grown up peple
>> Pocket money means a sum of money given by our parents.
i use a pocket money for eat a snack or play with my friend
i use a pocket money for eat a snack or play with my friend
>> I use my pocket money to eat some snacks and play with my friends.
and Today\'s activity was very fun, Thank you teacher good bye!
and Today\'s activity was very fun, Thank you teacher good bye!
>> Today\'s activity is fun. Thank you teacher. Good bye!
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