i learned about sand today
학생이 쓴 원문
i learned about sand today and i like today's activity it is beacause i learned about new word bare food and i like today's activity was very fun. Thank you so much teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Benjamin! How\'s school today? Do you have a lot of homework again? Thank you for this. Don\'t forget the new word.^^ Study this if you have time after class. Bye! Bye!
T. Summer^^
i learned about sand today
>> I learned about walking in the sand today.
and i like today\'s activity it is beacause i learned about new word bare food
>> I like today\'s activity because I learned about a new word which is \"barefoot\".
and i like today\'s activity was very fun.
>> I like today\'s activity because it was fun.
Thank you so much teacher.
>>Correct
>> Thanks a lot teacher.
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