i learned about share a toy today
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i learned about share a toy today and i don't want share a toy it is beacause i don't have a much time and i have a card.block,and ball and today's activity was very fun Thank you teacher!!!
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Hello Benjamin! Good morning! Wow! Thank you for this. I really appreciate it. Here are my corrections to your sentences. Take some time to review them. Thanks a lot! Have a wonderful day ahead! Bye! Bye!
T.Summer^^ i learned about share a toy today
>> I learned about sharing toys today.
and i don\'t want share a toy it is beacause i don\'t have a much time
>> I don\'t want to share a toy because I don\'t have much time.
and i have a card.block,and ball and
>> I have cards, blocks and a ball.
today\'s activity was very fun
>> Today\'s activity was very fun.
>> I enjoyed today\'s class.
Thank you teacher!!!
>> Correct
>> Thanks a lot teacher
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