i learned about stars today.
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Hi there Benjamin! How do you feel now? I hope you are feeling better. Please get well soon.^^ Try to study this if you have some free time.
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T. Summer
i learned about stars today
>> I learned about the stars today.
and star is brightest and shiny and star\'s shap is round
>> Stars shine brightly and they are round shaped.
and it is like see star it is beacause star is shiny and brightest
>> I like seeing stars because they shine brightly.
and star is not planet
>> A star is not a planet.
and planet is earth and mars and
>> The planets are Earth, Mars, Mercury, Venus, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto.
Today\'s activity was very fun,Thank you teacher!!!
>> Today\'s activity was very fun so I thank you teacher!
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